Friday, 24 July 2015
rhyming poem
There once was a boy his name was Roy. He liked to splash in the trash and dance in his cash.That he won from the lotto while saying his motto.It turns out it was a scam so he went home and cooked some clams.And baked a cake that was made of flakes.He burnt the cake it smelt of smoke.He had a stroke and woke his poor mother Tpoke.He ended up dying everyone was sighing and his poor mother was crying.
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great rhyming in the poem:)
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