by Kaley and Caitlyn
Bang bang bang. “ james where are you” I yell I turn around and almost on cue James appears out of nowhere walking almost Zombie like with a knife stick out of his back. Suddenly a knife come swirling through the air and stabs into his arm and then another and another. Then he drops dead drowning in a pool of his own blood. “James” I scream “are you alright.” There was no reply until I start crying my best friend is dead. “Ha,ha,ha,ha” I hear someone laugh and then another and another until at least 5 people were laughing.They all came out of the dark in a large (but at the same time small ) mob.OMG I thought it was me gone too .Until James got up and started laughing too he said “omg you are so gullible it was just a prank”
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ReplyDeleteHi Kaley,
ReplyDeleteIt's me Alaskah at Hay Park School.
I really like this descriptive writing, it has inspired me a lot. This writing is much better than my boring writing. Even though it's about James getting killed, the writing was more understanding. How did you come up with this prank? Keep up the fantastic work!
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Alaskah.
Hi kaley,
ReplyDeleteIts me Jaime
This was funny to read